One day it was a rather windy day. My dad was trying to sleep and the Wind was
not letting him. So he turned to me and
told me to go tell the wind to be quiet.
"But you must listen to my directions. You have to first put your arm out of the
smoke hole and then stick your head. The
wind will listen to you only if you do that."
So I climbed up to the smoke hole at the top of our
teepee. But as I got closer and closer
to the smoke hole, I got more and more excited.
My father did not let me normally see what was outside and I was a very
curious girl. I wanted to see what the
world was like because my father normally had me stay in the teepee and never
go anywhere. So when I reached the smoke
hole, I stuck my arm and my head out of the smoke hole at the same time. Before I knew, I felt a tug on my hair and I
was off! I was being whirled around in
the air, across the ground, over the shiny black ice. It was one of the most terrifying and
exciting things to have ever happened to me!
Eventually I started to feel the cold no matter what I did. It was completely inescapable no matter what
I did.
Suddenly, I felt myself land on the ground, on the frozen
solid ice. I was huddled there,
shivering from the cold thinking that I was going to die right then and
there. I just waited for something,
anything, to happen.
Suddenly, I barely saw a figure in the distance. I was half delirious by this point in time
and thought it was just a figment of my imagination. I didn’t realize that it was an actual person
coming towards me, so I just closed my eyes and waited for something to
happen. Next thing I know, I was being
picked up in a pair of soft, warm, furry arms.
I realized that the figure I had seen was actually a grizzly bear!
“Don’t worry little one.
I will take care of you. You will
be safe with me,” he whispered to me as he continued along his path. I feel asleep in his arms from the exhaustion
of everything that had happened. I woke
up when I felt a sudden rush of heat.
“Don’t worry sweetheart.
You are going to be ok. Let me
get you warm and give you some food,” said a new grizzly bear, who I was
assuming was the wife of the grizzly bear that had picked me up from the
ground.
Both of the grizzly bears helped me regain my health. They nourished me, cared for me, and
basically became my second set of parents.
As time went on, I grew older.
Soon I was old enough to marry and it was decided that I was to marry
the grizzlies’ son. I had known him ever
since I had been brought into the grizzlies’ house, so the choice to marry him
was a clear one.
We got married, and then children followed. The mother grizzly became worried about what
my father would say. I had been away
from him for such a long time; it was hard to imagine him back in the
picture. But mother grizzly insisted
that we needed to let my father know that I was alive, married and that he had
grandchild. So we sent the eldest child
back to my father to let him know about me.
We only had to wait a day or so to hear anything.
My father stormed into the grizzlies’ house, furious.
How DARE you take my daughter as your own. She is my child! She belongs to me! She does not need to marry any grizzly ever!”
he spat those last few words. “She is
coming back with me to my teepee.”
“Father, don’t do this.
They cared for me when I was sick and I love them!” I tried to plead
with him, but he was not having it.
“I don’t care what you say. You are coming with me and we
are leaving all of these grizzlies and grizzly children behind. And as for YOU,” he spun around and pointed
at the grizzlies, “you will never stand on two legs again, and you will never
be able to speak, AGAIN!”
And with that he stormed out of the house dragging me with
him. I cried for the rest of my days for
the loss of my beloved grizzly family.
Author's Note: I wrote this story based off of the story I read called Old Man Above and the Grizzlies. I wrote this story from the perspective of the Old Man Above's daughter and what she must have felt throughout the entire story.
What an interesting story this is! I would have liked a little more information about the original story in your author's note (but I know I can click on the link and read it if I really want to :) ). I get the feeling that this story is about why grizzly bears walk on all fours and can't talk. I love how so many of the Native American stories are origin stories.
ReplyDeleteYour story was very interesting. At first, I couldn’t help but think how weird/creepy it was that she married and had kids with a grizzly bear. As I continued to read, I realized that these grizzly bears were not like the grizzly bears that we know. I realized that this story was an origin story. I thought it was a cool idea to make this story from the daughter’s perspective.
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